Log Line: When a man's vision glitches, and he is forced to reenter the real world, he realizes how out out of it he really was by observing the acts of strangers.
All sequences in animatic wedding scene: we need to know he’s flying a kite. 1) start with kite and follow string to the figure; or 2) start with wedding scene and pan down to guy flying kite…try new reference footage so the time it takes to notice what he’s doing takes as long as in the first two shots.
Still images of eyes: you should tell they are smiling the effect shown is really good Try faces in motion rather than static (use motion blur and move the face according to the motion happening)
All sequences in animatic
ReplyDeletewedding scene: we need to know he’s flying a kite. 1) start with kite and follow string to the figure; or 2) start with wedding scene and pan down to guy flying kite…try new reference footage so the time it takes to notice what he’s doing takes as long as in the first two shots.
Still images of eyes: you should tell they are smiling
the effect shown is really good
Try faces in motion rather than static (use motion blur and move the face according to the motion happening)