A young man desperately
wants to find greater meaning or answer to life so he decides to go
on a long term isolated journey to an unexplored area of the galaxy,
where he discovers something after a near death experience that
finally satisfies his desires.
animation roughly put together with scenes so far
Ship animations with edited asteroids
For next time
continue polishing backgrounds
MORE cloud tests :3
refining of character animation
maybe some sound??
maybe some sound??
Really good motion continuity shots 1-5
ReplyDeleteWe need a reaction shot after you show and he sees the being (CU of face)
Realize G-forces in body position when he’s avoiding asteroids
in control room: shot is static - should character be in motion and you convey a more crazed attitude? can you move him to the right of the screen so we see the asteroids coming from screen left?
asteroids shots - great atmospheric perspective
being: background - how to hint at planet surface? great to dolly forward continuously. background sharper texture than foreground, counter-intutive, maybe it’ll work but could being have some sharper and very small dispersed particles?
soundtrack: need ambient sound of (air vents or ventilation) in ship, maybe go to no sound at all when camera is outside ship
add some motion blur to the asteroids.
after crash, have windshield cracked in a few places? disarray in backgorund, circuit boards fizzing? alarms?