Sunday, April 20, 2014

Shelby Jones 4/21

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LwDS25LcAys

3 comments:

  1. Put crossfades between music to smooth out transitions and don’t change the volume when they start, just overlap each sound at the same volume
    Shot one: start on the image so it doesn’t come in from right, pan slower to girl
    Sound is scary when she’s looking at flower, maybe change it
    Time travel is working well…foot move works well
    Birds cross the “barrier” between his and her side…maybe they are small and get bigger
    Can fix position of girl between sitting on rock and when he appears? in close up, begin her moving back by adding frames, then end the motion in the full shot that comes next
    seasons: offset birds or seasons so it isn’t so continuous?
    he should look away from her…she should look away from him?
    add some eye white to left of his eyes so he’s looking into z space in front of the screen rather than at her….same with her looking, she should be looking “past” him or down.
    Text “special thanks” jumps down in a few frames…check keyframes and delete or zero out where positions change
    Effects look great! We think about this one later.

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