SALTS skin color needs to be more consistent per character (filter over interior scenes?) could you speed up the shot where he approaches the lever? could they throw rudy up in air during cheer? pan up in waterfall scene make more ‘intentional?” shot where ship and limb are seen close up, needs some background (reads like interior walls right now) when ship falls, kids catch rudy, then start to run out before the next shot where the ship is falling sound of pops where helmet tubes come off, could bridge one pop on shot before, a sync where tube shot is, then the third more crowd sound when kids are on the grass make louder the waah as he’s falling down the stairs
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could you speed up the shot where he approaches the lever?
could they throw rudy up in air during cheer?
pan up in waterfall scene make more ‘intentional?”
shot where ship and limb are seen close up, needs some background (reads like interior walls right now)
when ship falls, kids catch rudy, then start to run out before the next shot where the ship is falling
sound of pops where helmet tubes come off, could bridge one pop on shot before, a sync where tube shot is, then the third
more crowd sound when kids are on the grass
make louder the waah as he’s falling down the stairs
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