Log Line:
After discovering how to time travel for the first time in human history, one girl must rediscover how she was able to accomplish it in the first place.
http://youtu.be/WvuKqDh1SoQ
Next Week:
Tweak different parts of it
Add in Season Changes
Sound
working much better with these changes
ReplyDeletebeginning shots to her on rock, seem a bit fast and maybe some not needed. should feel slower. could you open with her sitting on the rock with the flower? can he appear in more of a flicker so he’s connected to the particle cloud from which he emerges? we need to see his foot step on flower and in the shot with the flower on the ground we need to see his foot move away (motion continuity). maybe he suddenly disappears when he crushes the flower, and this is reflected in the timing of your shots. can we register the change in the flower with a very different color when it’s “on” and “broken?”